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Fri, 19 Feb 2010 23:25


I liked this video a lot, especially as the video is your first, the use of suspense and comedy is good (The part where none of the guns work) but the man who killed all of them was he in the chase or just some guy stealing money??? If I could name things for you to improve it would be realism and camera shots, try to hold the guns properly to give a sense of realism and when possible try not to jerk the camera round too much as it gives a sense of being at sea, you can still move it (because for this it's a good effect) but try to dim it down a bit, otherwise a very good video, well done guys!

Posted By Kiniski14
Sat, 20 Feb 2010 03:06


Thank you for the input. I agree with your suggestions and will keep them in mind when I shoot my next film, Thanks again!

Posted By Lawrence189
Sat, 20 Feb 2010 12:37


Look forward to seeing it!

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A man is being chased, you imagine why. This is my first short film, let me know what you think and your critiques.

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Posted By Lawrence189 on Tue, 09 Feb 2010 06:21

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