There are a total of 3 comments for this short film.
I don´t kown what I say... realy a young Film.
Perhaps a little more Exaggeration, and Photography skill.
you should see the Films of Stephen Chow, It is helpful.
Hi neev, Let me frank with you. One or two camera angles are good but there was no scope for editing as you didn't take shots to go for cuts. this helps the developing the story. I hope you understood what I said. also as far story is concern any story needs a start,middle and end, thats totally depends upon the writers thought. I hope this feedback would help you. Keep making films and also keep watching films.
Regards
Carroll
I do these sort of little films with my brother and friends all the time-but if I were going to post them on the internet I would only put the really good ones up. Well Neev-bar, this one had its good moments, like the weird crying and the bizarre stair jump/fall, but overall you should have put in more of a story. Show us the thrill of a wheelchair race or the guy going to the hospital. And why did the guy even get his license revoked?