There are a total of 3 comments for this short film.
Nice premise - flesh it out some more.
I didn't really get who was the cool kid and who wasn't. I think for such a short film it's hard to tell all that about two characters in a minute. The description should just be:two friends go in an old dark house and die. It should have focused on the mood and not so much on the characters since it was super short. The beginning was sort of lame(it usually is for scary films anyway.) The ending was good though.The other friend's sudden death combined with that song was okay-but what totally ruined the effect of creeping the audience out was the fact that the wrong song came on. It should have been edited out.
oh and i forgot to say that the whole thing about the loop for eternity would not have been noticed unless you said it in the description. It looked like the film was just reminiscing about how the boys got in the house or something- but I really don't know how you would be able to show that "loop for eternity" concept on a film anyway-maybe if you replayed the same thing over but that would be boring for the viewer...i don't know